They want 100 words? I don't know if I can write that much. Here goes:
As always, the dynamicism and flow is awesome. You always have great taste in how you pose characters, right down to how their hair flows. You have a good sense of how to use negative space between characters so they don't look cramped.
I like the general idea of the background shapes (it has some 80s retro). The only faults are: 1. The florescent green draws my eye in to the circle-line area and over-powers the three characters, or at the very least, fights with them. 2. I find the women's faces a bit scary...too harsh. Maybe it's all that black. This one is subjective...maybe it works well with how the comic book is written. I haven't read DangerGirl.
As always, the dynamicism and flow is awesome. You always have great taste in how you pose characters, right down to how their hair flows. You have a good sense of how to use negative space between characters so they don't look cramped.
I like the general idea of the background shapes (it has some 80s retro). The only faults are:
1. The florescent green draws my eye in to the circle-line area and over-powers the three characters, or at the very least, fights with them.
2. I find the women's faces a bit scary...too harsh. Maybe it's all that black. This one is subjective...maybe it works well with how the comic book is written. I haven't read DangerGirl.
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